Not bad, not bad! Rather endearing, even. A pretty good base. It just needs, something a little more...how about,
"All I wish for is a single day bereft of rain, that I might enjoy the sun's warmth on my face one more time." And then, "The sun warms mine as well, for the day without rain has come, though it may be our last."
[apparently still has enough energy to workshop this in the most unnecessary way possible so that's. probably. a good sign??? (did it have to be phrased so ominously though) (also hugo why. hugo please--)]
Oh, I'm not too disguised currently, but I'll be concealing myself until you're here...being somewhat out in the open, one can never be too cautious of pursuers on this sort of occasion. [reassuring!] If you'd like to have a disguise anyhow, though, do feel free! A hoodie is the uniform of common crime nowadays for a reason, not a bad choice. And the code phrase should suffice either way, yes?
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"All I wish for is a single day bereft of rain, that I might enjoy the sun's warmth on my face one more time."
And then, "The sun warms mine as well, for the day without rain has come, though it may be our last."
[apparently still has enough energy to workshop this in the most unnecessary way possible so that's. probably. a good sign??? (did it have to be phrased so ominously though) (also hugo why. hugo please--)]
Oh, I'm not too disguised currently, but I'll be concealing myself until you're here...being somewhat out in the open, one can never be too cautious of pursuers on this sort of occasion. [reassuring!] If you'd like to have a disguise anyhow, though, do feel free! A hoodie is the uniform of common crime nowadays for a reason, not a bad choice. And the code phrase should suffice either way, yes?